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Saturday, July 4, 2009

Surreal Dreams…

I sit beside the shore of the sea,

and hear the waves sigh.

I look at the stars shining so,

in the moon kissed sky.

 

I smile at the antics,

of the frivolous frolicking fawn.

And marvel at the coming,

of yet another beautiful dawn.

 

A teardrop escapes my eye,

as I hear the beautiful lark sing.

Thinking about you,

I let my dreams take wing.

 

I'm can’t enjoy the dreamy surreality,

and I don’t cease to wonder why.

There's so much life around,

and yet....deep inside I die....

21 comments:

Roshmi Sinha said...

Amazing!

You are truly multi-talented...

Sumit said...

Thanks Roshmi! :)

Choco said...

OMG!!! That was some heart wrenching poetry! Very well thought out :)

Anamika. said...

Beautiful :)

Corinne Rodrigues said...

Sumit - Lovely as always. What are you doing pursuing an MBA??? You need to get out there and publish some stuff ;)
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Nikita said...

lovely images created as always :)

A journey called Life said...

one of the rare times i cry reading..btw u have been tagged

Sumit said...

@Choco... thanks! :)

@Anamika... :)

@Corinne... perhaps the XLRI tag will draw some extra publishers. :D

@Nikita... thanks! (Btw, I still haven't been mean to Nik. Ask him to treat me, huh? :P )

@Aparna... I didn't mean for you to cry. :(

I'll complete the tag soon. Thanks!

A journey called Life said...

@sumit- i mean to say this poem was very moving.. u do have a way with words, and like some one in the above comments mentioned, u should consider publishing some of these..

Me said...

:'(

k.ø.c.h.ü said...

I'm can’t enjoy the dreamy surreality,
and I don’t cease to wonder why.
There's so much life around,
and yet....deep inside I die....

Cool work dude...hmm tiny doubts though...de first line...

de last too lines wer real cool..wid life around n a dyin soul..kudos..

n HII..officially...random visit!!!

Nikita said...

u've not yet been mean to him?? thats jus plain irresponsible! no treat for u. hmphh.
he deserves a mean senior for bng the moron that is, especially since goin there :P

Saurabh said...

nice poem, though i feel that you're far better a writer than a poet ;)

Sumit said...

@Aparna... I write poetry just for the fun of it. I'd rather be known for my prose than poetry. :)

@Dee... :)

@Nithin... thanks! And yeah, official welcome. ;P

@Nikita... he's got enough mean profs to take his case... haha... ask him about 'Gango'... you'll find out...

@Saurabh... thanks! By saying that, you seriously made my day.

numerounity said...

Beautiful poem!!

Gautam said...

awesome...

Megha said...

Wow, beautiful. You have beautifully woven the hope and sadness in the poem.

Keep writing :)

Roshmi Sinha said...

You have been tagged!

Check out my latest post: "More tags... One down, 2 more to go!" for further info...

Shreyans Mehta said...

And after death passes you
You become what you are
Static, unmoulded, unmoved
Can never get you far

It is indeed after death
That life shows its way
Only in the darkest clouds
Do you see the silver ray!

Well-written Sumit... The poetry was indeed moving...

http://whysoserioustoday.blogspot.com said...

beautiful poem :)

Nimmy said...

Awesome poem!! Simply loved it!