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Saturday, October 24, 2009

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I stare at the limitless sea,
that mass of never-ending blue,
and listen to the crashing waves,
singing to me of you.

11 comments:

Ashley said...

The song of the sea....Yes..It does whisper strange things...Lovely lines... :)

Ashley said...

Oh! Turns out I was first!!! :D

Sameera said...

Kya baat hai!

BrownPhantom said...

Nice one :).
Short and sweet.Add definitely deeply romantic.

Grayquill said...

Nice! - were you writing about your old friend Grayquill :) No? Hmmm...

@ Ashley - I'm sixth but really fifth

Roshmi Sinha said...

Lovely lines...

Megha said...

just 4 lines saying so much. Very nice

Sumit said...

Thanks for the lovely comments folks. :)

Sanand said...

Nice poem.

workhard said...

Very intense.. although the poem is short.. its got strong emotions.. Good work!!

Work from home India

Shreyans Mehta said...

Nice... Beautiful :)