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Monday, March 30, 2009

Desolate Thoughts

 

Flightless emotions,

trapped in a cage.

Struggling for freedom,

crying out in rage.

10 comments:

Corinne Rodrigues said...

Poignant...and the picture, is it yours?
Corinne

Tangerine said...

lovely!

Sauron said...

Thanks again, Corinne. No, the pic is not mine, I generally download royalty-free images off the web.

Thanks Tang! :)

Nikita said...

i love the images you post with ur lil poems...it adds wonderfully to the feel of it! :)

Abk said...

infact, ur pictures add more feel to it than the words themselves.. as the saying goes, a picture speaks a thousand words.. :)

Sauron said...

Tsk... tsk... :'( And I thought my words were the ones drawing attention.

*sits in a corner and sulks*

Scriber's Web said...

That's a lovely photo and a fabulous poem.

Me said...

n then as u sit in the corner and sulk..(..pic n words complement well)
u raise ur head up..
and look around the cage..and suddenly U realize..
that the cage isn't bolted frm outside
it just seemed so..
U slowly get up..
n push open the door..
happy n free, all raring to go.. :)

Sauron said...

Thank you, Scriber!

@Dee... I certainly hope so. :D

Shreyans Mehta said...

The photo makes the poem go alive. Your poem resonates one of mine: http://incessantlytimeless.blogspot.com/2008/08/cage.html