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Friday, March 20, 2009

Slipping away


I held my love tight,

gripping it in my hand,

but it slipped out quietly,

like loose grains of sand…


Me said...

Scattered by the wind,
you feel, have lost,
those grains of sand,
turning back U let go,
what u clenched fist held
until u see..
What was gone, has come home..

sigh.. in need of urgent restoration! :I

Lead on..

Tangerine said...

beautiful, simply beautiful.

Sauron said...

Thanks Dee and Tang :)

Corinne Rodrigues nee Campos said...

To hold, you must first open your hand. Let go.



Sauron said...

Corinne, that's a beautiful thought. Thanks for sharing! :)

Hakuna Matata said...

Woww!! Pic and words... I'm rendered speechless.

Dazediva said...

I have been mesmerized by this piece for a few days now.

I have linked one of my posts to your site - do check it out :)

I planted roses in the flower bed
Watching from the window ledge
Waiting for the shoots to bloom
All in vain, for even the soils
Must have felt my gloom

Sauron said...

Thanks Sindhu!

@Diva, that's an awesome one! Thank you for sharing it. :)