No shattering sounds,
no fragments to see.
No answered prayers,
just an unheeded plea.
A heart, broken,
yearning for your touch.
Wishing for your smile,
loving you too much.
No tears shed,
no cries heard.
Heavy oppressive silence,
not a spoken word.
A heart lies broken,
haunted by its past.
Battered by its present,
bitter to its last.
20 comments:
You have made even the silence so poetic. Very beautiful.
:)
Thanks! Btw, I'm tempted to call you by your nickname... unless you can suggest another shorter name... :P
lemme guess, will u sumit?
lol! keeping the joke aside,
here this one u've come up with is really nice, infact nicer, i'd say..
its not for nothing that they say that one's silence can be louder than their words.. :)
Very well written; silence perfectly described :)
Sure!! Most of the people I know call me Kaddu anyway! (even though I hardly look like one! I look more like bhindi!)
:D
Abhishek...thanks! Btw, what's the result? XLRI?
Diva... thank you :)
Kaddu/Bhindi...both names sound funny... :P
well, sumit, i dint make it.. WL 89.. stand no chance :)
I hope may be something better is in store, or may be its not the right time for me.. :)
Abhishek.. don't worry...
a) there's a chance.. a slim one, but still a chance...
b) remember YNWA? :)
well, yeah..
Walk on, walk on, with hope in your heart
And you'll never walk alone
You'll never walk alone :) :)
Though i doubt about that chance thing, but, its never too bad to be an optimist, isn't it? wish i cud do something about it.. :)
Absolutely!! Two weeks ago, how many people would have given us a chance for the Premier League title? Aur ab dekho... :)
All the best!
P.S. Nikhil ka kya hua?
He converted it I think :)
PS: Not that m a big liverpool fan, but i like the spirit of this club :)
I am more of a anti ManU guy >:D
Cool! If he did, congratulate him on my behalf please... :)
And being Anti-Man U is good enough to be on my side... :P
P.S. we are now 'chatting' here.. :|
Hi Sumit Bhai...Very nice one...Seems to have straight from the heart :P (btw i am maruvit from pg)
I have been ooh-ing and aah-ing for the last 10 minutes, wondering what to say. i think i'll juz appreciate in silence for now! :P
i really do love it :)
PS: not that i intend to 'chat' here, but YES HE DID!! m chooo happy for him. oh n we also had HCF day before ;)
@Maru... thanks! :D
@Nikita... thanks!! :)
Please congratulate him on my behalf (and congratulate yourself also, for helping him with the flowery language et al)
*ignores the comment about HCF*
neah, the credit is all his. i only like to tease n boast. :)
Its not just silence is it.. its actually loneliness after experiencing otherwise.. knowing what you've lost n then the silence.. nice work!
@souron.. Congratulate me yourself! guess we'll be meeting on the campus now!
n hey the HCF was pretty good.. but i dont mind ccd either :P
P.S. Liverpool doin too good actually.. saw gerrard?!, n am jus anti-blue so go reds go!!
@abk.. list was till what 60 last time.. n this time increase of 60 seats in pmir so some intershifting increase??.. umeed pe to duniya kayam hai ;)
@nikita.. you're too modest :P
Nikhil, congrats! And yes, you're bang on target about the thoughts behind this one. As long as you're anti-Man U or anti-Chelsea, I shall count you on my side. :P
See you on campus!
@Abk... don't worry, man! I expect much bigger WL shifts this time. :)
nice poem......vry beautifully said..keep expressing..enjoy life..take care..
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